Not satisfied, I am. My god this is a great picture. It captures the moment so well. I mean this is perfect. The view Twi had just before she turns RD back. The intensity RD felt as she fought to free herself so she could save what she thought was her home. She fought so hard to be see her friends (in her mind) betraying her.
This is EPIC! Well done. I can't see anything that needs to be changed at all.
Man, I read the fanfic this drawings are based of, and this scene (both the actual chapter and the fanfic chapter) just became more intense.
Rainbow Dash has to fight her friends, even though she only wants to forget what she did. But what makes the scene more intense is that she must keep faking being corrupted. She must keep acting like crazy despite the pressure, act like she is Discord's slave and not like she is aware of what she did.
RD looks mad! And Rarity looks like she's handling it with ease! XD I like the puffs of smoke, and sweat, although it looks like the sweat is attempting to rocket off of her face. The motion blur is too intense! Other than that, is her body gone? Or I just can't see it under the darkness?